tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5961749550486143719.post7697237914656039363..comments2023-10-31T03:19:50.755-07:00Comments on G. R. i A.: Blog CritiqueAlexandra Algarinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16893305895835727446noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5961749550486143719.post-53606714178340576382007-04-23T18:19:00.000-07:002007-04-23T18:19:00.000-07:00I thought it was great when you used the news arti...I thought it was great when you used the news article to relate to your topic and incorporated good quotes in your post titled, "Why Gender In Ads? What My Blog is Really About..."<BR/><BR/>I found it confusing when you didn't completely explain the stereotypes presented in the advertisements of your news article.<BR/><BR/>You're really good at finding gender stereotypes and ideals presented within advertisements as well as presenting them in explanations such as that of the collage.<BR/><BR/>I wish you could focus more on providing a more detailed analysis for the advertisements and their stereotypes such as in that of the news blog post.Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10348738267121054630noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5961749550486143719.post-73338097613391181252007-04-23T18:14:00.000-07:002007-04-23T18:14:00.000-07:00The quotes that you used in your posts were both c...The quotes that you used in your posts were both clear and concise. They helped support your arguement and could be differentiated from your own ideas in the posts.Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10348738267121054630noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5961749550486143719.post-78262815011744905032007-04-23T18:13:00.000-07:002007-04-23T18:13:00.000-07:00The sources that you cited in your posts were very...The sources that you cited in your posts were very relevant to the content of your posts and successfully helped to prove the arguements that you were making.<BR/> Some of the quotes that you used were not from the course readings but still related to the topic well. The quotes from the course readings help show a variation in the topics of your posts.Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10348738267121054630noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5961749550486143719.post-50988738676929489142007-04-23T18:11:00.000-07:002007-04-23T18:11:00.000-07:00All of your blog posts focused on gender and gende...All of your blog posts focused on gender and gender representation as your primary form of analysis. When analyzing the advertisements you may want to include more detail about what the ads say about norms and ideals in society.<BR/> Many of your posts make good analytical arguements regarding gender and advertisements. For posts such as the gender and news post you may want to include a more of an analysis about the female stereotypes in the ad and what caused them to make the news.Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10348738267121054630noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5961749550486143719.post-31219834106751780432007-04-23T18:07:00.000-07:002007-04-23T18:07:00.000-07:00Your blog has been consistently related to your to...Your blog has been consistently related to your topic throughout the semester. All of your posts have been relevant to the topic of gender and advertisements.<BR/> You seem very interested in your topic of advertisements as you mentioned in your post titled, "Why Gender In Ads? What My Blog is Really About..." All of your posts mention advertisements that seem to interest you as well.Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10348738267121054630noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5961749550486143719.post-5762558770588971022007-04-23T18:05:00.000-07:002007-04-23T18:05:00.000-07:00Alex, Your analtical work used to describe your c...Alex,<BR/> Your analtical work used to describe your collage was very impressive. You accurately pointed out the norms and ideals that are shown in the images as well as described the messages that they sent very well.<BR/> Your analytical strength of analyzing will be a great tool for your final blog post and presentation by discussing the ideals and messages that advertisements send to its viewers.Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10348738267121054630noreply@blogger.com